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 My Fanfiction! Max and the Time Cube

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spektralkid99
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PostSubject: My Fanfiction! Max and the Time Cube   Fri Apr 19, 2013 12:59 am

Hey Guys! I just wrote a fanfiction for Paranatural! I'd love if you checked it out and gave some feedback. cyclops

It's my first one, so promise you won't be TOO hard on me! hehe cherry

http://sdixon194.blogspot.com/2013/04/max-and-time-cube.html
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PostSubject: Re: My Fanfiction! Max and the Time Cube   Fri Apr 19, 2013 5:26 pm

Truthfully, I am confused about its tone, it has really serious elements like 'The Purge' and doesn't explore them. That type of idea would really set the mood for a more serious story, especially if the characters are older. Just my two cents.
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PostSubject: Re: My Fanfiction! Max and the Time Cube   Sat Apr 20, 2013 10:35 am

10/10 fantastic work

actually flawlessly executed.

i dont want to spoil anything but you had me believing it was one thing all the way up to the big plot twist at the end at which point everything became clear

thank you for writing this
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PostSubject: Re: My Fanfiction! Max and the Time Cube   Sat Apr 20, 2013 1:55 pm

Hey thanks! Glad you liked it Very Happy

Was thinking about doing a sequel. Do you guys have any suggestions? Thanks for your help! AAH!
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PostSubject: Re: My Fanfiction! Max and the Time Cube   Fri Apr 01, 2016 12:10 pm

Holy hypnotists, that was quite a ride. Nice job bromigo!
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PostSubject: Re: My Fanfiction! Max and the Time Cube   Mon Apr 04, 2016 6:07 pm

Hmmm... I don't usually read fanfiction, (mainly because I've never really encountered any), but maybe I'll give this a read.

Wow. That was actually pretty good! Nice going. I like the story idea.
Would you mind if I said that I'd like to edit it, though? There were a couple of things that I think could be changed.
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