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 Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.

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PostSubject: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Tue Feb 23, 2016 6:29 am

The story will be posted one chapter at a time, to keep away from too much text in one post. It's still a lot of text though, so I'll stick the chapters in spoiler tags.

Here are actual spoilers for the story, by the way, if anyone wants to see how it'll more-or-less turn out in the end, 'cause I only really work on this thing once a year.
All of the information about the story I have written down, including the fullish plot, backstories, and other information.:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Tue Feb 23, 2016 2:25 pm

Chapter One:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Tue Feb 23, 2016 2:26 pm

Chapter Two: The Quest Begins!:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Tue Feb 23, 2016 2:29 pm

I'll just post three chapters for now, I have like 10 and it's a pain to copy and paste 'em.

Chapter Three:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Wed Feb 24, 2016 12:31 am

I didn't read the first post with the spoilers, but I read all three chapters, and I'm excited to see what comes of this! I didn't know you wrote stories, NinjaKitten! Really cool. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Wed Feb 24, 2016 1:35 am

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. (By the way another chapter BAM)

Chapter Four: Fight Time!:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Fri Feb 26, 2016 11:39 pm

Interesting! A pendant that magically attached itself to him, hmm...
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:24 am

Myes.
Chapter Five:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sat Feb 27, 2016 7:15 pm

Did you fit both of the vocaloid twins into your story? Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sat Feb 27, 2016 9:50 pm

That's what I was thinking at the time, yes. I first had the idea for the story after I listened to/watched one of their songs. I think it was called "Death Should Not Have Taken Thee," though what I actually wound up doing was a bit different from what happens in the song.

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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:44 am

(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ Words of encouragement.

One thing I'd like to point out though, is that you described the amulet as gold first and then as silver when Myogi examined it...
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sun Feb 28, 2016 4:07 pm

Ah, right. You might find some more inconsistencies like that, since I hadn't completely solidified things like appearances and stuff when I started the story, and I changed things up at a later point in the story, so I had to go back and change things, so I might've missed something. It would be a big help if you would point out where there are more inconsistencies so I can fix them!

Chapter Seven: Troll!:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sat Apr 02, 2016 6:10 am

Have another chapter.

Chapter Eight: Kajiya the Smith:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Mon Apr 04, 2016 6:10 pm

Chapter Nine:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Mon Apr 04, 2016 11:41 pm

Apophyllite wrote:
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ Words of encouragement.
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Something I noticed, though; in Chapter Nine you basically retell everything twice.  Kaj retells the story of meeting Milen before and after their first night, and there are a lot of differing details.  Same goes for the abandoning of the town and death of his father.
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Tue Apr 05, 2016 12:55 am

Ah, oops. Wonder how that happened... I'll fix it soon. Thanks for pointing it out!
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sun Apr 10, 2016 3:42 am

Is that better?
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sun Apr 10, 2016 11:02 pm

I think so. I didn't re-read the whole thing, but it looks like you took out the original explanation and left the one that happens later at the workshop, eh?
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PostSubject: Re: Some incomplete story of mine which has absolutely nothing to do with Paranatural and I really don't know whether I should post it here or not but here you go anyway, read it if you want I don't really care.   Sun Apr 10, 2016 11:46 pm

I like the banter at the forge, and I had already presented the readers with a huge wall of text, so it was what seemed the most logical option to me.
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