Hey Guys! I just wrote a fanfiction for Paranatural! I'd love if you checked it out and gave some feedback.

It's my first one, so promise you won't be TOO hard on me! hehe

http://sdixon194.blogspot.com/2013/04/max-and-time-cube.html

Truthfully, I am confused about its tone, it has really serious elements like 'The Purge' and doesn't explore them. That type of idea would really set the mood for a more serious story, especially if the characters are older. Just my two cents.

10/10 fantastic work

actually flawlessly executed.

i dont want to spoil anything but you had me believing it was one thing all the way up to the big plot twist at the end at which point everything became clear

thank you for writing this

Hey thanks! Glad you liked it

Was thinking about doing a sequel. Do you guys have any suggestions? Thanks for your help!

Holy hypnotists, that was quite a ride. Nice job bromigo!

Hmmm... I don't usually read fanfiction, (mainly because I've never really encountered any), but maybe I'll give this a read.

Wow. That was actually pretty good! Nice going. I like the story idea.
Would you mind if I said that I'd like to edit it, though? There were a couple of things that I think could be changed.