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Spidey
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PostSubject: Re: Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC)   Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 04, 2014 11:56 am

1. Thats an easy enough fix, my bad.

2. The strength thing was actually a double error, i typed 10 instead of 1, and the next number which was 5 got auto corrected because my auto correct said "10 to 5 ? thats not right.  . .here lemme fix that for you" so will fix

1st though, crocodiles have a tremendous amount of strength which is where he gets it from, I really had to research this to find out when i made him, because everywhere you go, you see that their jaws are what pops up, but i really didnt want a hero that runs around biting stuff up.

2nd. He had incredibly terrible reflexes prior, but snakes have great speed and reflexes which improved his.
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Erie, Man of Danger
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PostSubject: Re: Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC)   Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 04, 2014 2:39 pm

1 to 5 tonnes is much more reasonable. Yes crocodiles jaws are incredibly powerful, and I totally understand you not wanting to limit that strength to his face. Just know though that the they sacrifice a lot to achieve that strength in their jaws, such able to open their jaws with the same amount of strength (Crocodile Dundee :p) I would however want you to move that ability to a later stage instead of a stage 1, like stage 3. Like I said, this is for minor heroes, and 1 ton is still roughly over 10 times the amount a normal human can lift. This shouldn't be such an easy accessed ability, and would fit more with turning into a human sized Lizard (which I assume is what you mean by gigantic) step by step.
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PostSubject: Re: Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC)   Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 04, 2014 3:29 pm

Well i mean, couldnt i give him at least an olympic level of strength at base power? he has to be able to fight crooks and i did say he was scrawny.
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PostSubject: Re: Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC)   Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 04, 2014 3:54 pm

Sure,

perhaps also make stage 2 half strength (1000lbs-2.5 tones)

and stage 3 full strength.
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PostSubject: Re: Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC)   Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 04, 2014 4:07 pm

Done
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Erie, Man of Danger
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PostSubject: Re: Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC)   Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 04, 2014 5:07 pm

Accepted, you can post any time in Super cafe.

Side Note as this is for Soroya as well, please please do not do one sentence posts, they give people very little to work with, and seem a little lazy. You guys put hard work on your characters, and I don't think it is too much to ask for at minimum paragraph posts. In general, its just good text roleplay. I'm not trying to be mean, but I do distinctly remember stating this before in my older rps.
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PostSubject: Re: Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC)   Super Mocha Cafe! (OCC) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 07, 2014 9:05 am

Yeah, getting those posts in that are long is no concern with me, if anything I have to make myself STOP writing,
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I'll adjust mine
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